In our writing we have been learning to start each sentence starting with the. We have also been learning to use the five senses in our writing and the five senses are, See, Hear, Fell, Touch, Smell.
When I do it I sometimes forget to add the five senses.
Here is a picture of the picture we have to describe.
This picture is what we have to describe. Here are the words that I wrote describing the picture.
Find five things related to the senses to describe
in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’
in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’
- The thunder was so so loud it gave me a headache.
- The lighting was so bright it hurt my eyes.
- The lighting was hitting some rocks so hard that I could smell something burning.
- The ocean was so so cold I couldn't touch it.
- The waves where splashing so hard that the water went up into the air and on to me then I could taste the salt water..
And that's my hot spot doc writing about the storm. I hope you all have a good day and please leave a comment and some feedback about my learning and writing. Bye see you.
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