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Wednesday, 21 August 2019

Hot spot doc: Should parents be able to track your location

Hey guys welcome to another post of mine.

Today I will be showing you my work about should parents be able to track your location.



I agree that parents should be able to track your location. Because what if you haven't  been home for five or 4 days, your parents would then feel very very worried for you. Your parents would then be able to track your location and if your somewhere abandoned they would be able to call the cops and then your parents would then take you home for the rest of the day.  

That's why I think it's a good idea for your parents to track you.

So here is my work.


Should parents be able to track your location?

Intro: I think parents should be able to track you.

Evidence 1: Parents should/shouldn’t because. Parents should be able to find your
location because what if you were lost and didn’t know the way back home or the way to your friends
place so then your parents could track you and tack you home.

Evidence 2: I agree/disagree with this statement because. I agree that parents should
track you just encase your lost or in trouble.

Conclusion: I think that… I think parents should be able to track our locations.


That's all for today I hope you have enjoyed to day post and please leave a comment for my learning
and also some feed back. Have a nice day byee.






2 comments:

  1. Hi Alla,
    Well done for getting your writing up on your blog! You hav a beautifully organised blog post and are really putting in the extra effort to keep your bogs at 'quality' status. A handy tip for pasting in your writing is to use 'Ctrl + Shift + v' and it will paste your writing in using the dame font and hopefully won't shoot off the edge of your blog. But you will need to go back and change this so that we can all see your writing! Keep up the good work!
    Miss D

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  2. Hi Miss D,
    Thanks for letting me know that my writing was shooting off of the edge. To be honest I actually agree with you it is pretty hard to read the words. Other than that thanks for the feedback for my learning.
    Have a nice day Miss D!
    Allazayha

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