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Thursday, 8 August 2019

Hot spot doc writing Show Don't tell

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Today I will be showing and telling you guys what my class have been working on.

We have been working on describing someones felling's and what there face is doing and what there body is doing. The felling's we had to describe was sad, happy, shocked and excited. The names of the people we had to describe was Johnny, Bailey, Jeremy and Tama.    Here is a picture of my work.

 Hope you liked today's blog have a nice day and please leave a comment and some feedback for my learning thanks bye.
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2 comments:

  1. Gary Roberts20 August 2019 at 07:32

    Kia ora Alla, thank you for sharing your hot spot writing about feelings. I like using adjectives because they add a sense of feeling to your writing. You have used some great feelings words which makes your writing more interesting.
    Mr R

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  2. Alla27 August 2019 at 09:58

    Kia ora Mr Roberts,
    Thanks for the complement. I also like to use adjectives. Thanks for the feedback I will try and make all my writing sound interesting.
    Other than that have a nice day.
    Allazayha

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