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Week 6
Write your own story inspired by this picture.
- Re-read once and highlight your descriptive sentences blue.
- Re-read again and highlight your strongest vocabulary yellow.
- Re-read again and check your full stops and capitals.
I was on a mission to help the others to help my boss take over the world but first we had to kill all of the bad people and kidnap the good people.
The first mission was to capture all of the good people and once we had done that we had to take them back to our hideout where our boss was. We had to make sure we had all of the good people so that we don’t get told off by our boss and get fired and then killed.
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