Today I will be sharing my writing with you guys.
What we have been learning in writing is be fluent writers and know what writing fluency feels like.
And that's what we are learning in writing.
Yesterday we did this challenge for writing. The challenge was to write one paragraph in 5 minutes. In the challenge it's hard because if you have written something and then you stop writing for more than 2\3 seconds the a red bar will show up around your screen. If the red bar is around your screen and you type something then the red bar will disappear. If you don't type something and the red bar is around your screen then it will come up with a red screen with white words and will say you failed. You can either carry on and do more or you can quit.
Here is what I wrote on the 5 minutes writing challenge.
He knew he must keep very still while he waited for his turn to show his class presentation so that he wouldn't get told off by his teacher and miss out on the presentation show. He was very excited for the presentation show. He also worked extra hard on his project. He tried to remember what he was going to say but he just couldn't so he stood up but just in time because it was already his turn. He was very nervous because he forgot his project. It was still in the same place that it was when he was sitting down waiting for his turn. When he went up in the front of the class everyone started to laugh. He sprinted out of the class and went into the halls. Tars streamed down his face because he felt humiliated after he forgot his project when it had been right beside him when he was waiting for his turn. He then started to hear the teacher yelling at the class because they where laughing at him and she said that they all had to say sorry or go on to the yellow spot for the rest of they day.
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