We are learning to use strong a descriptive words of our own.
What we had to do was write 100 words or 95 and more but if we did lees than 100 and 95 then we had to put in more words.
Here is the amount of words i wrote.
101
Here is my work.
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn't stop. I was freezing cold and my body was cover with goosebumps. Suddenly a grey car that I didn't recognised pulled up right in front of me . The suddenly a girl cam out of the car and she said "Hi. I realised that you are cold and are waiting for the bus to arrive." I said "Yes miss I am waiting for the bus to arrive and I am also cold." She told me that she was a police officer and was going to take me home safely. So she did and my family was happy to see me.
And that's all I wrote. I hope you all enjoyed my story but before I go can you please leave a comment and some feedback for my learning. Bye guys have a nice day.
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