Today I will be sharing my story for writing with you guys.
So what we have been learning to do is add strong and descriptive words into our writing, take out the small letters that are unnecessary and we have also been learning to use ( ING ).
If you see most of my writing that's in yellow highlight then that means somebody is talking. The words in yellow is the main character and then light blue is her mother talking. If you see some ( ING ) words highlighted in dark blue that means I have done that to make it easier for me and you guys to see the ( ING ) words.
Anyways here is my work. Hope you like it.
And that's all for today. Hope you enjoyed this post of mine. Before I leave please leave a comment and some feedback for my learning. Other than that have a nice day also Happy Halloween.
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