My water park writing

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Today I will be sharing my easttle Writing with you guys.

So what we had to do was make a new document and then we had to start writing.

The amount of words that I wrote was 589.

Anyways here is my work. Hope you enjoy.

It was a very hot day so me and my family went to a water playground. As I went into the water I felt so cool because before I went into the water I was boiling. I was trying to find my sister but I couldn’t find her. Other people were playing on the playground and the water was splashing up against my skin. I started to look for my dad but I also couldn’t find him. I then hopped out of the pool and then looked back into the pool because I thought that I would be able to see them, but I was wrong. Then I saw my dad and sister, they were siting on the towels that we put on the ground so we wouldn’t get a dirty body. I then asked them if we all could play in the pool but they said no. So I went into the pool and kept on sliding down the slide because it was so fun, but I did it so many times that it started to get boring. I went back to my sister and dad and sked if they could play in the water with me they both said yes. So we all went into the pool and played tag. My dad was the tagger. My dad was a fast swimmer so you couldn’t run away from him when your in a pool and your playing tag with him because he will tag you straight away.  My dad would get my sister an my sister would get me but she couldn’t find me because I was hiding on the playground but, she didn’t know that. 

My sister then found me because she had looked all over the pool but couldn’t find me. But there was one spot that she didn’t look and that place was the playground. I then tried to swim as fast as I could but before I got away she got me and piked me up and then through me into the water but that was a t the deep end. I tried to catch her so that I could tag her but she was to quick for me.So then I saw my dad and I came up behind dad and tagged him and swam away as fast as I could but he couldn’t get me because I was hiding behind the corner of the pool so that he wouldn’t be able to see me. He started to look for Tehya so that he could tag her. He found me but told me his plan and I helped him with his plan cause I new where Tehya was. The plan that we made was that I would be in and I would be trying to tag dad and we would be swimming to Tehya and then when we where close to Tehya I swam away as fast as I could. Dad would tell Tehya that I was in but he was actually in and then he went behind her and piked her up and through her into the water and tagged her. Then he swam as far as he could until he couldn’t see her. Tehya then stood up and tried to find me but I was no where to be found until she went to the deep end of the pool. She looked behind the corner of the deep end of the pool and found me then I hopped out of the pool and went to the shallow end of the pool.

And that's all I wrote. I really hope you enjoyed today's post but there is one more thing. Can you guys please leave a comment and some feedback for my learning. Thank you guys so much for reading this post have a nice day. Bye guys.